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Silent Prayer

Loneliness.
The only thing I can feel.
The stars that surround me at night aren't enough.
Is that selfish?
I brought this upon myself...

Wandering alone.
Gazing.
Our eyes meet.
I wasn't looking for you.
But it made my heart skip a beat.
What goes through your mind?

Heart-throbbing.
Everything attacks me as I try falling asleep.
The stars that surround me at night aren't enough.
Is that selfish?
I did this to myself...

Music plays.
Loudly.
That song comes on.
I close my eyes.
I wasn't thinking about you.
But it made my heart ache.
What do you think about?

Denial.
It doesn't ever escape me.
The stars that surround me at night aren't enough.
I'm sorry...
for my selfishness.

It strikes 11:11.
A shooting star sails silently through the night sky.
I close my eyes...
and then think about you.
Because that's all God needs to know.
something I wrote up. (:
I used to write a lot but I stopped after school actually started getting hard.
Soooooo this is the first written poetry type of thing I've written in over a year :'D
& the only reason is because my friend asked me to :'D
didn't know I had it in me LOL
sorry it's so depressing. LOL

...I'm not even sure if I put this thing in the write category or whatever.... LMAO
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devilcoin678 Featured By Owner May 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful piece of writing
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xBakaSenseix Featured By Owner May 10, 2011
thanks so much!~ (:
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EddieSketti Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2010  Student General Artist
This is really, really good :)
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xBakaSenseix Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2010
why thank you! (: (:
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